Shit Pay

[mike]

Shit Pay

Punch on in
work your shift
slave for job
at a pay thats shit

you hate your job
not much you can do
working every day
till your days are through

cant move up
no matter how hard you try
pick up three more
just so you can get back

bullet in your head
pray to god you survive
but punch in tomorrow
or its the next in line

[Kathinayoga Kalarippayattu]

you write that?

I hope you say yes because i enjoyed it

[mike]

yeah i wrote it

i started it a while ago, the night before i had to go to work the next morning

[God]

I like

[knaveofspades]

cant move up
no matter how hard you try
pick up three more
just so you can get back

Wouldn't it work better if you put "by" at the end of the last line, rather than "back"?

[mike]

it supposed to be there, i must have mis typed it, sorry about that....